Saturday, March 10, 2007

Family Tree

I posted a poem here about our family tree. This tree
made me think of our tree which would look like this with
knots and disease. The poem was pretty bad...as I just thought
it up and put it up. Not much thinking or revising. Sister
Fleta, told it was bad...she often tells me stuff that I know
but don't say. Well, I told her to write a better one and
she did. Here it is.....
Once there were sisters 4,
Sister 1 was old and grouchy,
Sister 4 was clean and mouthy,
Sister 3 was sweet but boring,
But it is Sister 2 you'll find adoring...
Fleta Adored Sister 2
Then she decided that was not good enough and rewrote it to say.
Sisters Four
Sister 1 was smart and grouchy,
Sister 4 was clean and mouthy,
Sister 3 was sweet and boring,
But Sister 2 is MOST adoring...
You can see she does not want to rile up Old Sister...first she
saidPatsy was old and then she said smart. Notice she says 3
was sweet and 4 was clean and Patsy was smart, but she IS
ADORING which is of course, the biggest lie is in the
kicker line; however the poem is much better than mine
about our tree being full of nuts. So I am revising as Sister 2
said I should!
Which Sister is the BIGGEST Nut ...you can
vote 1, 2, 3 or 4 on comments!!!
Sweet Sister Three...teehee

10 comments:

patsy said...

i think that family tree needs triming.

Anonymous said...

Ok, sister, only a sister would tell you this. ENOUGH with the stupid poems! Either write a good poem or forget it.

Fleta

Anonymous said...

Well, do you like the tree...Fleta write a poem and send it to me.

Anonymous said...

Once there were sisters 4,
Sister 1 was old and grouchy,
Sister 4 was clean and mouthy,
Sister 3 was sweet but boring,
But it is Sister 2 you'll find adoring...

Fleta
Adored Sister 2

Anonymous said...

poem, revised

Sisters Four

Sister 1 was smart and grouchy,
Sister 4 was clean and mouthy,
Sister 3 was sweet and boring,
But Sister 2 is MOST adoring...

Moral,
Write,
Review,
Re-write,
Post

Fleta

patsy said...

I WOULD NEVER DELETE MY BLOG. I WANT IT THERE WHEN I AM DEAD TO HAUNT ALL OF YOU.

Sister--Fleta said...

Well, Patsy, when you are dead, I may not be visiting your blog. When you were sick and could not post, it soured the blog thing for me. I kept wanting to 'hear' your voice through your blog posts. I like to visit all our family blogs and see what doings everyone wants to share, but, I like to visit your blog just to see what your are telling us today. And, sweet sister, it would not offend Patsy if we call her old. The old for Patsy was not a personality trate like the rest of the descriptions in the 'poem'.

Sister--Fleta said...

I put a tree poem on my blog. It tops your,

Adoring sister

Sister--Fleta said...

and you are not boring, but it rymed with adoring.

Annie said...

I think you are all absolutely delightful, each and every one of you!